First song

So this is my first legit song i have written since i have started writing a couple of years ago. Feel free to comment:) I have not changed the song at all because i think it gives it originality and i like that, even though if i had written something like that NOW i would change a lot:)
PS: the letters are chords for guitar:)

Sun comes up
By Jarrett Childers


G
Who wants to sing about anything
C
Nowadays
G
Nothing to fear, yet no one is here
C
Nowadays
D
Risks are not taken love is not found
C
All our hope crashes to the ground

Chorus

G
But then the sun comes up
C
And we spread our wings
G
We all look up
C
and see everything
D
Possibilities endlessly
C
falling from the sky lets spread our wings and fly
End of Chorus

V2
G
Addicted to drama, and grudges we hold
C
Nowadays
G
Insulting revolting we all are so bold
C
Nowadays
D
I wonder if we would say all the things
C
We say in our heads

Repeat Chorus

V3
G
But when i see you the dew and the blue
C
Evaporates
G
the gloom and the sorrow the fear for tomorrow
C
Evaporates
D
Dont go down or dim your light
C
With you here there's no need for trial or fight

Repeat Chorus

END


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